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 # Summary for Shareholders
 
 The idea of this proposal is to increase the use of BitShares by adding an
-option for improved privacy to the BitShares customers. This features comes at
+option for improved privacy for BitShares customers. This features comes at
 almost no cost to the shareholders (see below) since it is funded by a private
 investor. Customers using this feature will initially need to pay 3x the basic
-transfer fee to the improved privacy. The revenue from this is split as follows:
-20% go to the BitShares shareholders as burned BTS (removed from available
-supply, not refunded to the reserves), 20% go to a maintenance account that will
-fund future development and updates for this feature and is controlled by
-several individuals. The other 60% go to holders of a special asset that will be
-created during a protocol upgrade and issued to the private investor to
-compensate for his investment.
+transfer fee for the improved privacy. The revenue from this is split as
+follows: 20% go to the BitShares shareholders as refunded BTS (refunded to the
+reserve pool and as such removed from available supply), 20% go to a maintenance
+account that will fund future development and updates for this feature and is
+controlled by several individuals. The other 60% go to holders of a special
+asset that will be created during a protocol upgrade and issued to the private
+investor to compensate for his investment.
 
 A hidden cost for BitShares shareholders is that in order to keep 20% of the
 transaction fees, the fee has to be 5x the basic transfer fee but is only